I’m having serious second thoughts about my contest entry story.
I like the premise. So that’s a start.
The beginning is solid.
But the middle bits keep trying to cross over into “psycho kinky lesbian porn” land. Which is not the vibe I’m going for. Well, the “psycho kinky lesbian” part is fine. It’s the “porn” bit that’s problematic.
I still have a few more days for this round, so I’ll just have to let it simmer a bit.