I managed to pull of what I’d thought would keep the suspense going but limit the porn aspect. But now I’m wondering if it lacks the ultimate payoff. I still have just under 400 words to play with, so that’s not an issue.
Maybe I need to remove what I have as the ending, and end it earlier. Actually, now that I think about it, that could work. Hmm.
Now for the hard part: the title.
I hate titling things. I’m terrible at it. I’m not sure which is worse, actually. Titling or writing the third draft of something. Actually, maybe titling. That third-ish draft novel that I’ve been working on forever still has no title.
I also need to do a 1-2 sentence synopsis. Bah.