…maybe. I’m not entirely happy with it. It’s supposed to be in the horror genre, so I need to boost that up a few thousand notches, I think. But I’ve got less than 500 words left to play with, as the submission call is for stories 4000-5000 words.
I think I know where I can add it. But since I’ve already done 1500 words, I’ll work on that tomorrow.
I should also do more research on what it’s like to drown.
I have errands to run today. Need a new phone and pants without holes in them.